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Final Fantasy XIII-3: Dead Roses
Chapter 6: Rose bud

"They say Light Shines over darkness, but when the darkness becomes to powerful, it is possible for light to shine at all...."

The two groups walked separately the same way Lightning's group on the left Tide's on the right. There still lay conflict between the two groups mostly Tide and Lightning. this conflict will soon be resolved, when a greater enemy comes into play, these's young hero's where in for a whole lot.

'Tap, tap' it grew quiet, to quiet for some, the two leaders looked ready, ready for anything 'Boom' anything but that, Lightning quickly grabbed Tide pulling him towards her and being shielded by the giant rock in the road, hiding from the impact of the explosion. 'I dont know what came over me' she thought looking at Tide. For some reason she could remember a child she was close to. She looked down at Tide who she held in her arms she could see a small tear from his eye as he pulled away from Lightning very upset for some reason "come on will stop K.A.R.O.P  Solider our self, let them do there own thing" Tide continued walked away from Lightning "Tide we made it so far, we where so close" Seon replied "we just got to lead them a little farther, just a little farther and we can go" Nathan a man of little words had said looking over at Tide "Go!? GO WHERE!?" Tide yelled "Home? to a place controlled by Solider, where we live in completely different towns, so everything can go back to 'Normal'!?"

"Remember why you dragged us all along Tide" Kyo replied putting a hand on Tide's shoulder "Darkness isnt going to defeat its self Tide" he continued, Tide let out a long big sigh "fine just a little longer" another explosion went off "come on we have to check this out we cant ignore it again" Lightning ran toward the explosion 'shit' she thought as the explosion died down revealing a town on fire "Holy fuck!" Snow said walking up next to Lightning "what the fuck happened here". Tide stood in front of the town closed his eyes and took a deep breath "its the head quarters for K.A.R.O.P, well it will be"

"will be?" Snow asked "hehehe, your so lost aren't you old man" Sammy said hitting snow on the shoulder "he ment it will soon be built into the head quarters, in our time it is"
"who you calling old man?" Snow asked Sammy "uh you Old man, now quit the questions and lets go" Snow folded his arms and looked at Sammy then over to Serah then back at Sammy, "you think your so tough don't you little girl". "Ouch i wouldn't of said that" Vance said as the group backed away from Sammy "what did you say" Sammy looked at Snow very angry "I said..." before he could finish Sammy punched Snow in the face "you don't know the definition of tough" she turned and walked away. Lightning and Tide couldn't help but have a smirk on their faces the moment Snow got punched "ha, That's the third time you hit dad today in our time and his" Summer laughed with his arms around Serah still hugging her " Serah ran her fingers threw Summers hair as he hugged her "you ok snow" Snow got up slowly and looked at Sammy "Ouch, i allow you to hit me like that" Sammy laughed as they all walked "no" she continued "but i do it any way." "I would like to know something, something involving K.A.R.O.P" Prompto asked from the back of the group "huh" Tide looked back "if its about who works for K.A.R.O.P you Prompto dont want to know"

"huh, you'll never get anything out of me" Luka was in charge of the Caelum army while Tide went back in time he had captured Victoria Nox spy and supporter of K.A.R.O.P daughter of Prompto and Stella Nox. Luka's eyes narrowed "I'll gt it out of you one way or another" Victoria just smiled "I cant see why you don't support them they didn't do anything to you" Luka grew angry "K.A.R.O.P is a threat to people of Caelum and the rest of the world, Childern of Jenova and people like you should and will be stopped, i wont kill you if you help out" Victoria laughed at him "you kill me, I'm high up in fact I'm considered Royalty you cant touch me even if you wanted to"

"Uh ok" Prompto replied in confusion will the walked threw the burning town, they looked around looking for survivors of town "ouch" Lightning looked at her hand she had cut it while trying to move broken piece of wood out of her way "are you ok" Noctis asked standing behind Lightning "ya ill be fine" he looked over her shoulder looking at her hand then walked in front of her "here let me see it" he held her hand in his, she pulled away "I said I am fine" Noctis took her hand again and wrapped it "there you cant leave a wound opened like that it could get infected" Lightning looked up at Noctis and blushed lightly "you, uh" she walked away 'I didnt think she cared so much' she thought to her self "what no thanks" Noctis said following her slowly "why are you following me" Lightning said walking faster so Noctis couldn't see her blushing "we are all going the same place remember?" Lightning said nothing until she bumped into Tide who looked at Noctis and Lightning "Still following Lightning around huh Noctis" The starred at each other for a long moment when helicopters and planes covered the sky of the town soldiers slide down ropes and held their gun pointing them at "your surrounded come quietly"